《此處多麼神聖》(How Sacred Is This Place! 此地何其神聖)

去年九月,我寫了一篇評論譚某博士翻譯的《此地何其神聖》(How Sacred Is This Place!)之問題。今天,花了一個早上,做了一個較合粵韻及原曲歌詞意思的版本:

《此處多麼神聖》

Words by Fred Pratt Green
Music by Alfred Fedak
粵譯:海牛

此處多麼神聖!
How sacred is this place!
天恩開了路徑,
Its open door of grace
我心無懼快奔進!
be bold, my soul, to enter!
此間一起拜主,
May all who worship here,
一心篤信上帝
believing God is near,
已親臨會眾中心。
find God is at the centre.